Talofa lava, my name is Jay and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you made your writing so big . It made me think of Explaining more. If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog
kia ora (Hello) Lorilei I really like how you have made it about you but maybe next time you could Put more about your self.I rember when I did that.Did you like to do it? From larissa
Kia ora Lorilei
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning with us. Just wondering what your word cloud was about?
A little tip from us: a quality blog explains what the learning is about. You could add some more detail to your blog post to improve its quality.
From Setoga class
thank you so much
ReplyDeletethat was very nice of you
Kia ora Lorilei
ReplyDeleteI love how you explain what you are and a happy person you are in your word cloud.
Next time we would like to know more about you like tell us more what you do
Thank you from Jeneba
Hi Jeneba,
Deletewe were only meant to do 7 words about me including our name. If I was allowed the words I would add these words playful
and freely.
Talofa lava, my name is Jay and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you made your writing so big . It made me think of Explaining more. If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog
ReplyDeleteKia ora jay my name is Lorilei thank you for your awesome feedback and
ReplyDeleteyes I will check your blog it must 'be' wonderful!
kia ora (Hello) Lorilei
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have made it about you but maybe next time you could Put more about your self.I rember when I did that.Did you like to do it?
From larissa
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